tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796812217498057423.post2303932842312753987..comments2023-08-26T21:00:14.562+12:00Comments on Room 7 @ Glen Innes School: Jake the dogMrs. Tuakoihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03262209469803017525noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796812217498057423.post-60762356883775985902016-03-31T14:32:06.195+13:002016-03-31T14:32:06.195+13:00Hi Heather
I really like the way this story beca...Hi Heather <br /><br />I really like the way this story because it has lots of interesting adjectives and sentences. I also like the way you used nouns,verbs and adverbs because hardly people use them in their writing.Natalia@Glen Innes Schoolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14877699918265126889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796812217498057423.post-74178491513416912072015-10-30T11:29:52.675+13:002015-10-30T11:29:52.675+13:00Hi Room 10,
I love how you guys used your imaginat...Hi Room 10,<br />I love how you guys used your imagination to write this story. <br />Well done and keep up the hard work Mahdiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03490583106268539172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3796812217498057423.post-71875393517242959412015-09-15T13:02:42.975+12:002015-09-15T13:02:42.975+12:00I love your imagination here Heather, you write so...I love your imagination here Heather, you write so the reader can visualise, and almost feel how the dog felt about the cats, and making them part of his family, and you met your writing criteria so well.<br />Great work keep it up!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13298207290065581055noreply@blogger.com